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Plastic is vital for us

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Plastic is one of the most used materials around the world. People make lots of goods with plastics. I think, study lantern, headset, smartphone, computer's hardware etc., there are so many things that made with plastics. It says plastic is vital for us. If plastic don't exist in the world, lots of things will do not exist. And, people will be uncomfortable because lots of invented things for convenience are not exist.
P.S. Plastic that you said means that 'Plastic Bag'?

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Hi, Daniel! I wasn't only referring to plastic bags but plastic in general. Your reply is the perfect answer to the given question.   You just have to focus on the second conditional. I'll tell you about in class. 

- Teacher Debbie

Plastic is one of the most used materials around the world.
>> This is a good sentence.

People make lots of goods with plastics.
>> This is a good sentence.

 I think, study lantern, headset, smartphone, computer's hardware etc.,
>> I think desk lamps, headsets, smartphones, computer hardware, etc., are made of plastic.

there are so many things that made with plastics.
>> There are so many things made of plastic.

 It says plastic is vital for us. 
>> They say plastic is vital for us.

If plastic don't exist in the world, lots of things will do not exist.
>> If plastic didn't exist, lots of things would not exist.

 And, people will be uncomfortable because lots of invented things for convenience are not exist.
>> Moreover, if things invented for convenience didn't exist, people would be uncomfortable.

P.S. Plastic that you said means that 'Plastic Bag'?
>> P.S. Are you referring to plastic bags?

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