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Thank you! Ben and Hazel! You could pronounce it just like '·ç'. The name is from Nietszche's one-sided lover, Lou Salome ( you've heard the name, ·ç »ì·Î¸Þ) but she got married to his close friend. (Poor Nietzsche ¤Ð). She was German but her father was French-Russian. That'why her name, Lue gives off French vibe, I guess.

Lou was a writer and psychoanalyst. She interacted with and inspired the best intellects Europe of the time: Nietzsche, Rilke, Freud and so on. Wow!

While reading a book about Nietzsche written by Lou, I was inspired by her. And I talked to myself "Okay, I made a decision. Change my name from now on! If you were born as a woman, you should live at least like this."

* I'm too old to be some guys' muse, though! Umhahaha

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Hi Ms. Lou! ^^ How's your day going? Thanks for sending me your writing output! ^^ See you!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Thank you! Ben and Hazel! You could pronounce it just like '·ç'.
>>> CORRECT
 The name is from Nietzsche's one-sided lover, Lou Salome ( you've heard the name, ·ç »ì·Î¸Þ) but she got married to his close friend. (Poor Nietzsche ¤Ð). 
>>> CORRECT
She was German but her father was French-Russian.
>>> She is a German but her father is a French-Russian.
 That'why her name, Lue gives off French vibe, I guess.
>>>  That's why her name, Lue gives off French vibe, I guess.
Lou was a writer and psychoanalyst. 
>>> Lou was a writer and a psychoanalyst. 
She interacted with and inspired the best intellects Europe of the time: Nietzsche, Rilke, Freud and so on. Wow!
>>> 
She interacted and inspired with the best intellects Europe of the time: Nietzsche, Rilke, Freud and so on. Wow!
While reading a book about Nietzsche written by Lou, I was inspired by her.
>>> CORRECT
 And I talked to myself "Okay, I made a decision. 
>>>  And I told myself "Okay, I made a decision. 
Change my name from now on! 
>>> I will change my name from now on! 
If you were born as a woman, you should live at least like this."
>>> CORRECT
* I'm too old to be some guys' muse, though! Umhahaha
>>> CORRECT
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