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Why is English fluency significant for you?

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I always dreamed that I speak English fluently since when I was a child. However, I just studied English for school tests and couldn¡¯t use English in daily life like school or work. I got to have a chance to live in Canada because of my husband so I dreamed of it again. I want to live in Canada forever and have children here. To live here, I have to get a job and have a conversation with other foreigners without problems. I always rely on my husband these days when I have a problem in conversation. I also would like to meet a lot of foreign friends and learn a lot of things through them. Moreover, I want to grow my kids globally in the future. I want them to have lots of experience with other foreigners in Canada. Because I think the world is very wide and various. I became to have a motive for these things.

Beth, I have a question. Do I have to use the word 'suburbs' not 'suburb'? (suburbs vs suburb)

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Thank you for this Miss Chloe!

I always dreamed that I speak English fluently since when I was a child. 
>>> OR: I have always dreamt of speaking English fluently since I was a child.   
However, I just studied English for school tests and couldn¡¯t use English in daily life like school or work. 
>>> correct  
I got to have a chance to live in Canada because of my husband so I dreamed of it again. 
>>>  OR: I got to have a chance to live in Canada because of my husband so I started to dream of it again.  
I want to live in Canada forever and have children here. 
>>>  correct   
To live here, I have to get a job and have a conversation with other foreigners without problems. 
>>> correct    
I always rely on my husband these days when I have a problem in conversation. 
>>> correct    
I also would like to meet a lot of foreign friends and learn a lot of things through them. 
>>> correct     
Moreover, I want to grow my kids globally in the future. 
>>> ORMoreover, I want to raise my kids globally in the future.   
I want them to have lots of experience with other foreigners in Canada. 
>>> I want them to have lots of experiences with other foreigners in Canada.  
Because I think the world is very wide and various. 
>>>  correct    
I became to have a motive for these things.
>>>  correct      

Beth, I have a question. Do I have to use the word 'suburbs' not 'suburb'? (suburbs vs suburb)
>> Both can be used. They usually just use the "suburbs" to generalize the context, like to refer to all places which is a suburb.
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