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If We Work Together Like Termites, the Construction of Skyscrapers Can be Done Very Easily!
Passive Cooling Techniques and Air Moving Equipment: Not Needed for Incredible Natural Structures
Termite mounds, Incredible Natural Structures in Zimbabwe and Australia, Were 10% Cheaper to Build!
Does Mike Pearce, an African Architect, Have a Temperature Right After Cool Air Came in Through the Bottom?
Mike Pearce developing the same passive cooling systems has constructed various eco-friendly buildings throughout the world.
his constructing these buildings has contributed to the development of passive cooling techniques.
Amazingly, you can make your own passive cooling systems in your house by yourself.
We can move on to standard method after learning from sea urchins¡¯ mistakes.
By analyzing nature in various aspects, we get the secret of what nature has achieved.
In addition to missions in space, the design of a sea urchin mouth could also be used in other diverse fields.

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1. If We Work Together Like Termites, the Construction of Skyscrapers Can be Done Very Easily!
>> CORRECT

2. Passive Cooling Techniques and Air Moving Equipment: Not Needed for Incredible Natural Structures.
>> CORRECT

3. Termite mounds, Incredible Natural Structures in Zimbabwe and Australia, Were 10% Cheaper to Build!
>> CORRECT

4. Does Mike Pearce, an African Architect, Have a Temperature Right After Cool Air Came in Through the Bottom?
>> CORRECT (syntactically correct but semantically wrong)

5. Mike Pearce developing the same passive cooling systems has constructed various eco-friendly buildings throughout the world.
>> Mike Pearce, developing the same passive cooling systems, has constructed various eco-friendly buildings throughout the world.

6. his constructing these buildings has contributed to the development of passive cooling techniques.
>> His constructing these buildings has contributed to the development of passive cooling techniques.

7. Amazingly, you can make your own passive cooling systems in your house by yourself.
>> CORRECT

8. We can move on to standard method after learning from sea urchins¡¯ mistakes.
>> We can move on to the standard method after learning from sea urchins¡¯ mistakes.

9. By analyzing nature in various aspects, we get the secret of what nature has achieved.
>> CORRECT

10. In addition to missions in space, the design of a sea urchin mouth could also be used in other diverse fields.
>> CORRECT
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