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Which one should I read first?

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Which one should I read first? Hm......The left one!  I'll bring this book, to a successful conclusion this year.^^ I have to read at least 10 pages a day to complete my mission. Will it be possible considering my poor vocabulary? I think I should burn my love for English that just bloomed. May it won't end with one-sided love.... Haha.
This book was recommended by '조승연의 탐구생활', which is one of my favorate You Tube channels.

*It's very wet outside. I'm fully breathing the smell of the rain and the trees out of the window now. Maybe it would be last aroma of fall this year. After today, I heard it's going to really cold.
It's the last day of November. One more month to go until we usher in a brand-new year.  

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Jessie! 

I actually can't decide which book should you read first since I am not familiar with the both of them. I still have to read some reviews and feedback in order for me to recommend a book. 
But what I can advise you is that, read whatever catches your attention. Don't worry about vocabulary. That's why we read something to learn a new word or two in each day. Don't focus on the words but focus on the context of the sentences. If you have to read it over and over, then do so, before going to the next chapter. 

Your idea of  reading 10 pages a day is actually great, you don't have to rush in finishing the book. It is better that you understand each chapter. Then write down words that you've learned. Make different sentences using that word. 

Teacher Andrea 

Which one should I read first? Hm......
>> Which one should I read first? Hmmm.. 
>> Or: I was wondering which book should I read first?
 
The left one!&#160; I'll bring this book, <The Meritocracy Trap> to a successful conclusion this year.^^
>> On the left, The Meritocracy Trap, I want to make  a conclusion about this book by the end of the year. ^^ 

I have to read at least 10 pages a day to complete my mission. 
>> To be able to accomplish my mission, I have to read at least 10 pages a day. 

Will it be possible considering my poor vocabulary? 
>> Correct 

I think I should burn my love for English that just bloomed. May it won't end with one-sided love.... Haha.
>> I think I should be more passionate in learning English but I hope that it won't be a one-sided love. (Hahaha)
 

This book was recommended by '조승연의 탐구생활', which is one of my favorate You Tube channels.
>> The book was recommended by 조승연의 탐구생활, which is one of my favorite YouTube channels. 

*It's very wet outside. 
> Correct 

I'm fully breathing the smell of the rain and the trees out of the window now. 
>> Correct 

Maybe it would be last aroma of fall this year.
>> Maybe it would be the last scent of fall this year. 

After today, I heard it's going to really cold.
>> After today, I heard it's going to be really cold. 

It's the last day of November. 
>> Correct 

One more month to go until we usher in a brand-new year.&#160;&#160;
>> One more month until we usher in a brand new year. 
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