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HOMEWORK: Complete the sentences with WHAT, WHEN, WHY, BECAUSE, AFTER, BUT or THAT.
1. They stayed at home BECAUSE it was raining heavily.
2. People cause accidents WHEN they drink and drive.
3. Tommy went to his friends AFTER he had lunch.
4. I wanted to help him, BUT he said he could do it himself.
5. You should know THAT smoking is bad for your health.
6. Linda's father always watches TV WHEN he comes home from work.
7. We were playing tennis WHEN it started to rain.

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Hi Rosie! So here is the last one. ^_^
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HOMEWORK: Complete the sentences with WHAT, WHEN, WHY, BECAUSE, AFTER, BUT or THAT.
1. They stayed at home BECAUSE it was raining heavily.
>>> Correct. 
2. People cause accidents WHEN they drink and drive.
>>> Correct. 
3. Tommy went to his friends AFTER he had lunch.
>>> Correct. 
4. I wanted to help him, BUT he said he could do it himself.
>>> Correct. 
5. You should know THAT smoking is bad for your health.
>>> Correct. 
6. Linda's father always watches TV WHEN he comes home from work.
>>> Linda's father always watches TV AFTER he comes home from work.
7. We were playing tennis WHEN it started to rain.
>>> Correct. 
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