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How do you think you will change in the future?

작성자: 선*
2021-11-29 160

회원님의 영작문

This is what I keep asking myself nowadays. The extreme point of this question is the pursuit of happiness. That is how happy I will be in the future, so to be so, what should I do right now? Actually, I have no idea about what I need to prepare for my bright future. To study more, I am not confident enough to immerse myself into studying delightfully. I might lose interest soon, or I am likely to do very well. I can be a professor after the study. To travel more before I retire from my company, I would like to stay out of my country for some time to have a pause in life, but now we are under COVID 19. I can’t think of anything about going abroad. COVID 19 is getting stronger and stronger. What can I do if so? My future will come like this as I am now. I will change little by little, so I myself can’t feel a big difference between now and the future. Surely I can notice my physical change, but my spirit will be the same as now.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Jung, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin

This is what I keep asking myself nowadays. 
>>This is what I keep on asking myself nowadays. 
The extreme point of this question is the pursuit of happiness. 
>>The point of this question is the pursuit of Happiness.
That is how happy I will be in the future, so to be so, what should I do right now? 
>>On how to be happy in the future. what should I do right now to obtain that?
Actually, I have no idea about what I need to prepare for my bright future.
>>Actually, I have no idea on what to do to have a bright future ahead of me. 
 To study more, I am not confident enough to immerse myself into studying delightfully.
>>The truth is I am not confident enough to apply what I'm learning from the books. 
 I might lose interest soon, or I am likely to do very well. I can be a professor after the study. 
>>I lose interest in the middle like I usually do. I can be a professor once I graduate. 
To travel more before I retire from my company, I would like to stay out of my country for some time to have a pause in life, but now we are under COVID 19. 
>>I want to travel more after I retire from my company. I would like to take a vacation abroad and have some time to relax but now we are on a pandemic situation. 
I can’t think of anything about going abroad. COVID 19 is getting stronger and stronger. 
>>I can't think about anything but to go abroad. COVID19 is getting serious. 
What can I do if so? My future will come like this as I am now.
>>What can I do? It will just stay like this.
 I will change little by little, so I myself can’t feel a big difference between now and the future. 
>>It will change one at a time, there will be a big difference between now and the future. 
Surely I can notice my physical change, but my spirit will be the same as now.
>>  Surely I can see that I'm changing physically but my spirit is still the same. 
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