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2021-11-11 178

회원님의 영작문

1. Have you experienced holding a grudge against someone for a long time?
My Ex-boyfriend cheated on me. Until I noticed that, He had abnormally obssessed with me. Always searched my phone on my back and told me what to do or not even for my clothes. Since I didn't expect that kind of guy was cheating on me and he was my first boyfriend, I was totally shocked. I realized that the reason of His distrust was himself. I held a grudge for a long time and It was tough time to me. It is still difficult to me to trust men completely.

2. Which is more pleasant, forgiving or taking revenge?
I wish I could say 'Taking revenge is my pleasure in my life!'. Some people around me can do that freely according to their feelings. My friends said 'it depends, but if I can't forgive, I would choose to take revenge!' as soon as they heard this question. And 'Forviging is not pleasant! Revenge could be!' Partially I agree. But I am not good at those things. to me, It is easier to forgive or ignore.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Yu Jeong! 

Thank you for answering the Homework questions. Please take a look at the comments/ suggestions below: 

Question 1. Have you experienced holding a grudge against someone for a long time?

Your Answer: My Ex-boyfriend cheated on me. Until I noticed that, He had abnormally obssessed with me. Always searched my phone on my back and told me what to do or not even for my clothes. Since I didn't expect that kind of guy was cheating on me and he was my first boyfriend, I was totally shocked. I realized that the reason of His distrust was himself. I held a grudge for a long time and It was tough time to me. It is still difficult to me to trust men completely.

>> Before I found out that my ex-boyfriend cheated on me, I noticed that he was abnormally obsessed with me. He always searched through my phone behind my back and told me what to do or what clothes not to wear. Since I didn't expect that he was the kind of guy to cheat on me and since he was my first boyfriend, I was totally shocked. I realized that the reason of his lack of trust with me was himself. I held a grudge for a long time and it was a tough time for me. It is still difficult for me to trust men completely.

Question 2. Which is more pleasant, forgiving or taking revenge?

Your Answer: I wish I could say 'Taking revenge is my pleasure in my life!'. Some people around me can do that freely according to their feelings. My friends said 'it depends, but if I can't forgive, I would choose to take revenge!' as soon as they heard this question. And 'Forviging is not pleasant! Revenge could be!' Partially I agree. But I am not good at those things. to me, It is easier to forgive or ignore.

>>  I wish I could say "Taking revenge is my pleasure in my life!" Some people around me can do that freely according to their feelings. My friends said, "It depends, but if I can't forgive, I would choose to take revenge!," as soon as they heard this question, and "Forgiving is not pleasant! Revenge could be!" Partially, I agree, but I am not good at those things. For me, it is easier to forgive or ignore.

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I enjoyed reading your answers for the questions. :) For question number 2, there are only a few corrections, mostly on punctuations and capitalization only. :) Great job as usual! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas with me in your answers. :) 

Have a great night ahead! 

Cheers! 

~Miya^^
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