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In my opinion, I can change the home more beautifully via various way.
first of all, It will be tidy up one' room or home. If a lot of things stack in there, It will be show dirty
second of all, It is grow plants.
Plants will make more bright and comfortable in the room.
and Third is unify of color. I like wood style color. because It is can make feeling more warm.
so I bought wood chair, bad, table etc.

but sometimes I want to change the color
It's okay so far.

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Hello Ethan!

There are indeed a thousand ways we can rearrange the space we live in. It is one of my favorite things to do as a woman. For men, I am surprised that you are interested in these things too. 

If we live in an organized and tidy household, we can relax better and feel more comfortable. So, I hope that your home feels like these always.

Thank you for doing your homework! Great job!

-T. Donna =)

In my opinion, I can change the home more beautifully via various way.
>> In my opinion, I can change our/my home more beautifully via various ways.

first of all, It will be tidy up one' room or home. If a lot of things stack in there, It will be show dirty
second of all, It is grow plants.
>> First of all, it will be tidying up one's room or home. If a lot of things are stack in there, it will show a lot of dirt
Second of all is growing plants.


Plants will make more bright and comfortable in the room.
>> Plants will make brighter and more comfortable rooms.

and Third is unify of color. I like wood style color. because It is can make feeling more warm.
>> And third is unifying of colors. I like wood style color because it can make me feel warmer.

so I bought wood chair, bad, table etc.
>> So I bought a wood chair, bad, table etc.

but sometimes I want to change the color
>> Correct!
Or: B
ut sometimes I want to change the color.
 
It's okay so far.
>> Correct!

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