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What will you do this weekend?

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I will go to school this weekend to do school club activities. It's an English theater club, but now we can't watch the play in person at school, so I take a video and upload it. So I will go to school to help edit videos.
And I will do a assignment that I haven't done in a week. If I can't concentrate while doing it, I will study with my friend at a cafe.
After finishing the assignment together, I will meet my high school friends who I couldn't meet due to the exam period, talk about things I couldn't meet, and eat delicious things. And now we finish the online college, and start face to face class, so I'll go shopping with my friends or sister and mother.

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Hi Hye Won!

I am happy to see your answer for this homework.  Keep up the good work and practice more. :)


-T. Maine


I will go to school this weekend to do school club activities.

>>Correct.

It's an English theater club, but now we can't watch the play in person at school, so I take a video and upload it.

>>Correct.

>>OR: I will take a video and upload it.

So I will go to school to help edit videos. 

>>So I will go to school to help edit some videos.

And I will do a assignment that I haven't done in a week.

>>And I will do an assignment that I haven't done in a week.

If I can't concentrate while doing it, I will study with my friend at a cafe. 

>>Correct.
After finishing the assignment together, I will meet my high school friends who I couldn't meet due to the exam period, talk about things I couldn't meet, and eat delicious things.

>>After finishing the assignment together, I will meet my high school friends who I couldn't meet due to the exam period.  We will talk about many things and eat delicious food.

And now we finish the online college, and start face to face class, so I'll go shopping with my friends or sister and mother.

>>And now we finish our online classes, and start our face to face class, so I'll go shopping with my friends or sister and mother.

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