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I live in a small city called Quang Ngai. My hometown is located in Vietnam's South Central Coastal area. My hometown is the birthplace of Vietnam's first Prime Minister. My country is less competitive and stressful than a big city, so young people may have a comfortable and slow pace of life. Besides, what I love about my hometown is that the air is so fresh, and life in the countryside is so tranquil. I find the people in my town are most intriguing. They have a fairly simple life and the genuine smiles they would offer you every time you talk to them.

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Hi, Yen Nhi! ^^
I loved reading this. I think your hometown and its people are wonderful!
Thank you for sharing! ^^

- T. Rina


1. I live in a small city called Quang Ngai. 
>> CORRECT!

2. My hometown is located in Vietnam's South Central Coastal area. 
>> CORRECT!

3. My hometown is the birthplace of Vietnam's first Prime Minister. 
>> CORRECT!

4. My country is less competitive and stressful than a big city, so young people may have a comfortable and slow pace of life. 
>> My country is less competitive and stressful than big cities, so young people may have a more comfortable and slower pace of life.

5. Besides, what I love about my hometown is that the air is so fresh, and life in the countryside is so tranquil. 
>> CORRECT!

6. I find the people in my town are most intriguing. 
>> CORRECT!

7. They have a fairly simple life and the genuine smiles they would offer you every time you talk to them.
>> CORRECT!
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