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What do you wish your country to develop in the near future?

작성자: 류*연
2021-11-08 195

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I wish my country can handle of air pollution. As you know, Korea is suffered from China dust. Before the covid-19 outbreaking, we wear a mask most of day in an year due to China dust. Sometimes it is hard to see a far distance clearly. I have never thought I have to worry about an air when I was young. But now I have to check a weather forcast with a dust percentage. An air is a basic for human to live and I can not imagin that I am worring about it. And I think it goes worse than now in the future. Sadly Korea government avoid to say that issues to China and just focus on letting China government feel not bad. I know it is tough problem to solve it but we need to find a solution in the near future. Otherwise our next generation must wear a mask for 24 hrs and 365 days. Evey countries have an expectation which they can take off a mask very soon but Korean does not.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I have heard a lot about this problem, Kaycee! It's really a sad phenomenon. I hope it will be resolved immediately.-Faith-
I wish my country can handle of air pollution. 
>> I wish my country could handle air pollution. 
As you know, Korea is suffered from China dust. 
>> As you know, Korea has suffered from fine dust coming from China. 
Before the covid-19 outbreaking, we wear a mask most of day in an year due to China dust. 
>> Before the covid-19 outbreak, we wore a mask most of the time in a year due to fine dust. 
Sometimes it is hard to see a far distance clearly. 
>> Sometimes, it is hard to see things far away clearly. 
I have never thought I have to worry about an air when I was young. 
>> I never thought I had to worry about the air I breathe when I was young.
But now I have to check a weather forcast with a dust percentage. 
>> But now I have to check the weather forecast with the dust percentage. 
An air is a basic for human to live and I can not imagin that I am worring about it. 
>> Air is the basic need of humans to live and I cannot imagine that I am worrying about it. 
And I think it goes worse than now in the future. 
>> And I think it will get worse in the future. 
Sadly Korea government avoid to say that issues to China and just focus on letting China government feel not bad. 
>> Sadly, the Korean government avoids to say something about this issue to China and just focus on letting the Chinese government not to feel bad about such. 
I know it is tough problem to solve it but we need to find a solution in the near future. 
>> I know it is a tough problem to solve but we need to find a solution in the near future. 
Otherwise our next generation must wear a mask for 24 hrs and 365 days. 
>> Otherwise, our next generation must wear a mask for 24 hours and for 365 days. 
Evey countries have an expectation which they can take off a mask very soon but Korean does not.
>> Every country has an expectation that they can take off their masks very soon but Korean does not.
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