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I didn't brush my teeth often, so I got a plaque.
I use floss after brushing my teeth.
Chew on food.

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Good evening, Hui Yeon! 

Thank you for answering the Homework Question for 11/3/2021. Please take note of the suggestions below: 

Kindly use the following words in your own sentences. 

1. Decay
2. Plaque
3. Flossing
4. Chew

Your Answers: 
1. --no answer--
2. I didn't brush my teeth often, so I got a plaque.

3. I use floss after brushing my teeth.
4. Chew on food.

Corrected answers: 
1. If you don't brush your teeth properly, you will get tooth decay. [This is an sample sentence.]
2. I didn't brush my teeth often, so I got a plaque. [CORRECT.]

3. I use floss after brushing my teeth. [ Flossing helps get rid of food stuck in between teeth. ] Flossing is the word to be used for the sentence.
4. Chew on food. [ Let's chew our food properly.] Your sentence is incomplete. We can use 'CHEW' like how it is used in the sample sentence. 

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