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What do you want to change about you?

--> I want to think big about the value of myself. I've been full of the idea of being humble since I was young.
So I'm afraid to have a high goal for what I can do. As I got older, I realized that it was important to think that I could do more than I thought.

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Hi there Bo Im!

Believe it or not, I have thought in this same way as you did. When we become a bit older and think about ourselves and how selfless we had been in the past for our children, if we fast track the future, they will have their own lives and then, what will happen to us? 

Thus, since we still have time, we can still create great changes for our lives. This is not selfish, this is for our own good too.

Thank you and see you in a few.

-T. Donna =)

I want to think big about the value of myself. 
>> Correct!

I've been full of the idea of being humble since I was young.
>> Correct!

So I'm afraid to have a high goal for what I can do. 
>> Correct!

As I got older, I realized that it was important to think that I could do more than I thought.
>> Correct!
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