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Experiment is always exinting

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I like to make experiment. I always expect that what experiment is waiting me. Sometimes, some experiments are boring. But most of experiments are very exiting and interesting. And, these days my science team is very kind and nice so I love science class these days.

Diary: Today, I realized that i should finish my homework and play after that. If I play before finishing homework, then I have to do it tomorrow or tonight. It's not good because there are tomorrow's homework, and doing homework in night is tired. So I'll finish my homework before playing time.

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Hello, Daniel! You answered the question correctly. However, please be careful with the word exciting. You misspelled it. 

- Teacher Debbie

I like to make experiment. 
>> I like to carry out experiments.

I always expect that what experiment is waiting me.
>> I always look forward to it.

Sometimes, some experiments are boring.
>> This is a good sentence.

 But most of experiments are very exiting and interesting.
>> However, most experiments are very exciting and interesting.

 And, these days my science team is very kind and nice so I love science class these days.
>> Moreover, I love my science class these days because of my science team. My team is very kind.


Diary: 

Today, I realized that i should finish my homework and play after that.
>> Today, I realized that I should finish my homework and play after that.

If I play before finishing homework, then I have to do it tomorrow or tonight. 
>> If I play before finishing my homework, I might end up doing it in the evening or the next day.

It's not good because there are tomorrow's homework, and doing homework in night is tired. 
>> That's not good because I have to do more homework the next day, and doing homework at night is tiring. 

So I'll finish my homework before playing time.
>> So I'll finish my homework before playing.

That's a very important realization, Daniel. You should do your homework first before playing.  
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