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What motivates you to do a great job at work?

작성자: 류*연
2021-10-26 304

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My best motivation to do a great job is the salary. There are various values when we think about a great job. As I getting old, the money makes me feel satisfied only. But I do not like to work for an illegal thing for the money. I mean it is very worth of it in terms of working in legal way. Many people eagle to work in a big company which makes them more stunning and being proud. But they do not know it is hard to survive and a company does not guarantee the full time job forever. I heard about early 40's in Samsung, they feel worry about their future and they do not want to promote at all. If their payment is getting higher after promoting, they will be on the list which can fire at first. I do not want to be a part of machine. We have to prepare our future and I think the money is the utmost motivation to work harder.

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Wow! I didn't expect that thing about Samsung, Kaycee! But you are right, we should be really prepared and wise. See you!-Faith-
My best motivation to do a great job is the salary. 
>> CORRECT
There are various values when we think about a great job. 
>> CORRECT
As I getting old, the money makes me feel satisfied only. 
>> As I am getting old, only money makes me feel satisfied. 
But I do not like to work for an illegal thing for the money. 
>> But I do not like to work for an illegal thing for money. 
I mean it is very worth of it in terms of working in legal way. 
>> I mean it is very worth it in terms of working in a legal way. 
Many people eagle to work in a big company which makes them more stunning and being proud. 
>> Many people are eager to work in a big company which makes them more stunned and prouder. 
But they do not know it is hard to survive and a company does not guarantee the full time job forever. 
>> But they do not know it is hard to survive and companies cannot guarantee you a full time job forever. 
I heard about early 40's in Samsung, they feel worry about their future and they do not want to promote at all. 
>> I heard that the employees in Samsung who are in their 40s feel worried about their future and they do not want to get promoted at all. 
If their payment is getting higher after promoting, they will be on the list which can fire at first. 
>> If their pay gets higher after their promotion, they will be on the list which will be fired first. 
I do not want to be a part of machine. 
>> I do not want to be a part of this kind of company. 
We have to prepare our future and I think the money is the utmost motivation to work harder.
>> We have to prepare for our future and I think money is the utmost motivation to work harder.
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