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회원님의 영작문

When I sent some of construction documents to the job site by e-mail,

I missed the design instructions and owner's requirements to be provided

by the client. Afterward, I recognized that they were not included an important

design drawings After passing a few days, I gave the site missing items

by e-mail quickly. Now I could not forget that there was a big event.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Jin!

As you have requested, I have placed some suggestions on grammar as well as their explanations and samples so that you can easily determine them on the corrections. Kindly go over them below.

Thank you for your diligence in making your homework always. I hope that you can understand all of my explanations here.

See you next week!

-T. Donna =)

When I sent some of construction documents to the job site by e-mail,

I missed the design instructions and owner's requirements to be provided

by the client. 

>> When I sent some (Remove "of") construction documents to the job site by e-mail,

I missed the design instructions and (Add "the") owner's requirements to be provided

by the client. 

So: When I sent some construction documents to the job site by e-mail,

I missed the design instructions and the owner's requirements to be provided

by the client. 

Explanation: 1.) We can remove "of" or add "the" : When I sent some (of/ of the) construction documents to the job site by e-mail,... (Most of the nouns specially when specifically talked about in a sentence have "the" to mean that they are "a specific kind of something."
                           We can use the pattern without "of" in these sentences:
   1.) When I send some food to my mother, she receives them through a delivery man.
2.) When I [verb + some(adverb)+ noun] + other parts of the sentence. 
                                        Ex: When I pay some money to the bank, I do it online.     

                       2.) The same explanation as #1 is the reason for the use of "the" for "I missed the design instructions and the owner's requirements to be provided by the client."


Afterward, I recognized that they were not included an important

design drawings After passing a few days, I gave the site missing items

by e-mail quickly. Now I could not forget that there was a big event.

>> Afterward(s), I recognized that they were not included (Remove "an" and add "with the" instead.) important

design drawings (Put period here.) After (Remove "passing" or you can add "passing it".) a few days, I gave the site missing items

by e-mail quickly. Now I could not forget that there was a big event.

So: Afterwards, I recognized that they were not included with the important

design drawings. After passing it a few days/ After a few days, I gave the site missing items

by e-mail quickly. Now I could not forget that there was a big event.

Explanation: 1.) Afterwards is the correct adverb for of the word. Ex: I studied and I will rest afterwards.
                       2.) We need to add "with the" on, "I recognized that they were not included with the important design drawings." because we need the preposition "with" to show the direction of inclusion of the "design drawings" mentioned in your sentence.
                       

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