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Andrew 2017-11-30

1. If I can afford it, I would like to create a school free of fees or provide free education in the world's poorest country to create an environment where children can study.

2. In addition, I think it is important to relax and enjoy music. I will teach children Korean music, so they can understand Korea naturally.

3. Also, I hope that my dream of being a pilot will be achieved as soon as possible, so I can set up an orphanage and introduce Korea to the world.

alice 2017-11-30

If I can afford, I would like to build a free school in the world's poorest country to create an environment where children could study. In addition, I think it's important to relax and enjoy through music so children should be taught about Korean music that they may understand the language naturally. Also, I hope that my dream of becoming a pilot would happen soon for me to be able to start an orphanage and inform the world about Korea.

BANANA 2017-11-30

If I can afford it, I would like to create a free school in the world's poorest country to create an environment where children can study. In addition, I think it is important to relax and enjoy music through music, and to teach children Korean music so that they can understand Korea naturally. Also, I hope that my dream of a pilot as soon as possible will be achieved by setting up an orphanage and informing the world about Korea.




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