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Melissa 2017-11-17

It¡¯s a shame when I went traveling. We jump from a 233-meter height at Macau Tower with a lifeline. For a short period of 17 seconds, you may feel like dying from doing it, but I would like to experience flying while seeing the wonderful scenery so much. Although I was not able to pay the 600,000 won for last time, I will come back to the Macau Tower for bungee jumping if I get a job.

alice 2017-11-17

1. I was very sorry that I could not do it on this trip.
2. When we go bungee jumping from Macau Tower Bungee jump which is 233m high, we will jump into the sky with a lifeline.
3. We will do it for a short period of time for just 17 seconds but you would feel like you're about to die though you would still want to experience it because of the wonderful scenery while you're floating.
4. Although I couldn't pay 600,000 won for it, I will surely go back to Macau Tower for the bungee jumping once I get a job.




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