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167 Sunny ´äº¯: 2 2017-11-21 121 ´ä±Û

1. ¸ÕÀú, Á¡Á¡ ´õ ´õ¿öÁö´Â ³¯¾¾¶§¹®¿¡ ¿¡¾îÄÁÀ» ±¸¸ÅÇß¾ú´Ù. (°ú°Å½ÃÁ¦¹®ÀåÀε¥ Bacause ¹®Àå ½ÃÁ¦¸¦ ¾î¶»°Ô ¸ÂÃç¾ß ÇÒÁö ¸ð¸£°Ú¾î¿ä!) First of all, I bought a new air conditioner because it's getting hotter¡¦

1. ¸ÕÀú, Á¡Á¡ ´õ ´õ¿öÁö´Â ³¯¾¾¶§¹®¿¡ ¿¡¾îÄÁÀ» ±¸¸ÅÇß¾ú´Ù. (°ú°Å½ÃÁ¦¹®ÀåÀε¥ Bacause ¹®Àå ½ÃÁ¦¸¦ ¾î¶»°Ô ¸ÂÃç¾ß ÇÒÁö ¸ð¸£°Ú¾î¿ä!) First of all, I bought a new air conditioner because it's getting hotter in summer. 2. ±×·¡¼­ ¿ì¸®´Â ½Ã¿øÇÑ ¿©¸§À» º¸³¾ ¼ö ÀְԵǾú´Ù. So,we can have a cool summer.

alice 2017-11-21

First of all, I bought a new air conditioner because it is getting hotter in summer. It will help us to have a cool atmosphere during the hot season.

alice 2017-11-21

First of all, I bought a new air conditioner to have a cool atmosphere at home. It is because the weather hot in summer.

166 choiyijeong ´äº¯: 2 2017-11-16 115 ´ä±Û 2017-11-16 18:35:50

1.³ª´Â ±× ¿©Çà¿¡¼­ ÇÑ °¡Áö ¾Æ½¬¿î Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖ¾ú´Ù. 2. ¸¶Ä«¿ÀŸ¿ö ¹øÁöÁ¡ÇÁ´Â 233m¿¡¼­ »ý¸íÁÙÀ» ¸ö¿¡ Â÷°í ÇÏ´ÃÀ» ³¯µíÀÌ Á¡ÇÁÇÏ¸ç ¶³¾îÁö¸é µÈ´Ù. 3. 17Ãʶó´Â ªÀº ½Ã°£µ¿¾È, ¡®ÀÌ·¯´Ù Á×°Ú±¸³ª¡¯¶ó´Â ´À³¦À» ¹ÞÀ»¡¦

1.³ª´Â ±× ¿©Çà¿¡¼­ ÇÑ °¡Áö ¾Æ½¬¿î Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖ¾ú´Ù. 2. ¸¶Ä«¿ÀŸ¿ö ¹øÁöÁ¡ÇÁ´Â 233m¿¡¼­ »ý¸íÁÙÀ» ¸ö¿¡ Â÷°í ÇÏ´ÃÀ» ³¯µíÀÌ Á¡ÇÁÇÏ¸ç ¶³¾îÁö¸é µÈ´Ù. 3. 17Ãʶó´Â ªÀº ½Ã°£µ¿¾È, ¡®ÀÌ·¯´Ù Á×°Ú±¸³ª¡¯¶ó´Â ´À³¦À» ¹ÞÀ» ¼ö µµ ÀÖÁö¸¸ ³ª´Â ¸ÚÁø dz°æÀ» º¸¸é¼­ ÇÏ´ÃÀ» ³ª´Â °æÇèÀ» ³Ê¹«³ªµµ ÇÏ°í½Í´Ù. 4. ºñ·Ï Àú¹ø¿¡´Â 60¸¸¿øÀ̶ó´Â Å« µ·ÀÌ ¾ø¾î¼­ ÇÏÁö ¸øÇÏ°í ¿ÔÁö¸¸ ³ªÁß¿¡ ÃëÁ÷À» ÇÏ°Ô µÈ´Ù¸é ²À ´Ù½Ã ¸¶Ä«¿ÀŸ¿ö¿¡°¡¼­ ¹øÁöÁ¡ÇÁ¸¦ ÇÏ°í ¿Ã °ÍÀÌ´Ù.

Melissa 2017-11-17

It¡¯s a shame when I went traveling. We jump from a 233-meter height at Macau Tower with a lifeline. For a short period of 17 seconds, you may feel like dying from doing it, but I would like to experience flying while seeing the wonderful scenery so much. Although I was not able to pay the 600,000 won for last time, I will come back to the Macau Tower for bungee jumping if I get a job.

alice 2017-11-17

1. I was very sorry that I could not do it on this trip.
2. When we go bungee jumping from Macau Tower Bungee jump which is 233m high, we will jump into the sky with a lifeline.
3. We will do it for a short period of time for just 17 seconds but you would feel like you're about to die though you would still want to experience it because of the wonderful scenery while you're floating.
4. Although I couldn't pay 600,000 won for it, I will surely go back to Macau Tower for the bungee jumping once I get a job.

165 LEE HYUN DO ´äº¯: 2 2017-11-16 143 ´ä±Û 2017-11-16 00:41:06

³ª´Â Áö³­ 50¿©ÀÏ°£ ¿µ¾î°øºÎ¸¦ À§ÇØ ºÎ´ÜÈ÷ ¸ÅÁøÇß´Ù. ¿ÀÀü°ú ¿ÀÈÄ·Î ³ª´©¾î ¿ÀÀü¿¡´Â ÀüÈ­¿µ¾î¸¦ ½ÅûÇÏ¿© ÇöÁö¿¡ ÀÖ´Â ¿ø¾î¹Î°ú ¸ÅÀÏ20ºÐ¾¿ 1:1´ëÈ­¸¦ ÇÏ¸ç µè°í ¸»ÇÏ´Â ½ÇÀü ¿¬½ÀÀ» ÇÏ¿´°í, ¿ÀÈÄ¿¡´Â ȸȭ½ºÅ͵ð¡¦

³ª´Â Áö³­ 50¿©ÀÏ°£ ¿µ¾î°øºÎ¸¦ À§ÇØ ºÎ´ÜÈ÷ ¸ÅÁøÇß´Ù. ¿ÀÀü°ú ¿ÀÈÄ·Î ³ª´©¾î ¿ÀÀü¿¡´Â ÀüÈ­¿µ¾î¸¦ ½ÅûÇÏ¿© ÇöÁö¿¡ ÀÖ´Â ¿ø¾î¹Î°ú ¸ÅÀÏ20ºÐ¾¿ 1:1´ëÈ­¸¦ ÇÏ¸ç µè°í ¸»ÇÏ´Â ½ÇÀü ¿¬½ÀÀ» ÇÏ¿´°í, ¿ÀÈÄ¿¡´Â ȸȭ½ºÅ͵ð ¸ðÀÓ¿¡ Âü¼®ÇÏ¿© ½ºÇÇÅ·À» °øºÎÇÏ°í ½Í¾îÇÏ´Â »ç¶÷µé³¢¸® ´Ù¾çÇÑ ÀÏ»óÀûÀÎ ÁÖÁ¦·Î ´ëÈ­¿¬½ÀÀ» ÇÏ¿´´Ù. ¶ÇÇÑ Â¥Åõ¸® ½Ã°£¿¡´Â ¹Ìµå¸¦ ½ÃûÇÏ¸ç ½¦µµÀ× ¿¬½À¿¡ ¸ôÀÔÇÏ¿´°í, ¹®¹ýÁö½ÄÀ» ´Ã¸®±â À§ÇÏ¿© Ä·ºê¸®Áö ´ëÇп¡¼­ ÃâÆÇÇÑ "grammar in use"¸¦ Á¤µ¶ÇÏ¸ç ³ªÀÇ ¿µ¾î½Ç·Â Çâ»ó¿¡ ½ÉÇ÷À» ±â¿ï¿´´Ù.

Banana 2017-11-16

I had striven to study English for the last 50 days. I made the study schedule in the morning and in the afternoon. In the morning, I took a phone English class with a local native teacher for 20 minutes every day in a 1:1 conversation. In the afternoon, I participated in conversation study meetings where I practiced conversations on topics. In addition, I watched some American dramas and spent my time practicing shadows. In order to increase my knowledge of grammar, I devoted myself to improving my English by reading "Grammar in Use" published by Cambridge University.

eric 2017-11-16

I strived to study English for the last 50 days. I made the study schedule for morning and afternoon. In the morning, I took a phone class of 1:1 conversation with a local native teacher for 20 minutes every day. In the afternoon, I participated in study meetings where I practiced English conversation about various topics. In addition, I watched some American dramas and spent time practicing shadowing. In order to increase my knowledge in grammar, I devoted myself to improving my English by reading "Grammar in Use" published by Cambridge University.

164 JIWON ´äº¯: 2 2017-11-15 110 ´ä±Û

¾È³çÇϼ¼¿ä. ȸ»ç¿¡¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÇÁ·¹Á¨Å×À̼ÇÇÒÀÏÀÌ ¸¹Àºµ¥ °¡²û 1¿ùºÎÅÍ 12¿ù±îÁöÀÇ ±×·¡ÇÁ¸¦ º¸¸é¼­ '1¿ùºÎÅÍ 6¿ù±îÁö ÆǸŰ¡ Á¶±Ý ´Ã°íÀÖ´Â Ãß¼¼´Ù. 7¿ùºÎÅÍ´Â °¨¼ÒÇÏ°í ÀÖ´Ù. 10¿ùºÎÅÍ´Â ´Ù½Ã ´Ã¾î³ª°íÀÖ´Ù.' ÀÌ·±¡¦

¾È³çÇϼ¼¿ä. ȸ»ç¿¡¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÇÁ·¹Á¨Å×À̼ÇÇÒÀÏÀÌ ¸¹Àºµ¥ °¡²û 1¿ùºÎÅÍ 12¿ù±îÁöÀÇ ±×·¡ÇÁ¸¦ º¸¸é¼­ '1¿ùºÎÅÍ 6¿ù±îÁö ÆǸŰ¡ Á¶±Ý ´Ã°íÀÖ´Â Ãß¼¼´Ù. 7¿ùºÎÅÍ´Â °¨¼ÒÇÏ°í ÀÖ´Ù. 10¿ùºÎÅÍ´Â ´Ù½Ã ´Ã¾î³ª°íÀÖ´Ù.' ÀÌ·± Ç¥ÇöÀ» ¾î¶»°Ô ÇÒ±î¿ä? Á¦°¡ Çѹø ½áºÃ´Âµ¥ ¸Â´Â Ç¥ÇöÀÎÁö À߸𸣰ڽÀ´Ï´Ù. there was an istant increace in crease from january to june but it start to dcrease from july and from octobor it increase again

Alice 2017-11-15

The sales increased a bit in January to June. However, it decreased in July. It is increasing again this month of October.

eric 2017-11-15

The sales increased for the month of January until June and decreased in July. It is increasing again this month October.

163 bang yu bin ´äº¯: 3 2017-11-14 177 ´ä±Û

"±×·¯°Ô" ¶Ç´Â "±×·¯°Ô¿ä", "¿Ö±×·²±î¿ä?" ¹º°¡¸¦ Áú¹®ÇßÀ»¶§ "±×·¯°Ô" ¶Ç´Â "±×·¯°Ô¿ä"¶ó°í ´ë´äÇؾßÇÏ´Â »óȲÀ̳ª "¿Ö±×·²±î¿ä?"´Ù½Ã µÇ¹¯°í½ÍÀº »óȲ¿¡¡¦

"±×·¯°Ô" ¶Ç´Â "±×·¯°Ô¿ä", "¿Ö±×·²±î¿ä?" ¹º°¡¸¦ Áú¹®ÇßÀ»¶§ "±×·¯°Ô" ¶Ç´Â "±×·¯°Ô¿ä"¶ó°í ´ë´äÇؾßÇÏ´Â »óȲÀ̳ª "¿Ö±×·²±î¿ä?"´Ù½Ã µÇ¹¯°í½ÍÀº »óȲ¿¡ ¾î¶»°Ô¸»ÇؾßÇϳª¿ä?

Banana 2017-11-15

»ó´ë¹æ ¸»¿¡ µ¿Á¶ÇÏ°í ½ÍÀ» °æ¿ì ¾²´Â Ç¥ÇöÀ» ¹°¾îº¸½Ã´Â °Å¶ó¸é.... I know what you mean. ( ±×·¯°Ô ¸»À̾ß. ¸¶µµ ¹«½¼ ¾ê±äÁö ¾Ë¾Æ).

Melissa 2017-11-15

Of course !
Definitely !
Yeah !
I hear you !
I know where you're coming from.

JADEN 2017-11-15

yeah(±×·¯°Ô~), Tell me about it (µ¿ÀÇ Ç¥Çö: ±×·¯°Ô³ª ¸»À̾ß~), why is that? (¿Ö ±×·¡?)

162 yoo su JA ´äº¯: 2 2017-10-05 129 ´ä±Û

1. Àϵµ Çϸ鼭 °øºÎÇϱ⿡´Â »çÀ̹ö´ëÇÐÀÌ ³ª¿¡°Ô´Â ¾È¼º¸ÂÃãÀÌ´Ù. 2.³ªÀ̸¦ ¸Ô´Â´Ù´Â °ÍÀº ½Ã°èÅ¿±ÀÌ Ç®¸®¸é ±×´ë·Î ³öµÎ´Â °ÍÀÌ ¾Æ´Ï°í, °¨¾ÆÁָ鼭 ÇöÀç¿¡ ÃÖ¼±À» ´ÙÇÏ´Â °ÍÀ̶ó°í »ý°¢ÇÑ´Ù. 3.Çö¸íÇÑ »ç¶÷Àº¡¦

1. Àϵµ Çϸ鼭 °øºÎÇϱ⿡´Â »çÀ̹ö´ëÇÐÀÌ ³ª¿¡°Ô´Â ¾È¼º¸ÂÃãÀÌ´Ù. 2.³ªÀ̸¦ ¸Ô´Â´Ù´Â °ÍÀº ½Ã°èÅ¿±ÀÌ Ç®¸®¸é ±×´ë·Î ³öµÎ´Â °ÍÀÌ ¾Æ´Ï°í, °¨¾ÆÁָ鼭 ÇöÀç¿¡ ÃÖ¼±À» ´ÙÇÏ´Â °ÍÀ̶ó°í »ý°¢ÇÑ´Ù. 3.Çö¸íÇÑ »ç¶÷Àº Àο¬ÀÌ ¾Æ´Ñ ÁÙ ¾Ë¸é¼­µµ ³¡ÀÚ¶ôÀ» Áö±ßÀÌ ÀâÀ» ÁÙ ¾Æ´Â »ç¶÷À̶ó°í »ý°¢ÇÑ´Ù.

Sandy 2017-10-09

Cyber University is the right place for me to study while I¡¯m working.
I think getting old is not just like an untied watch, we need to do our best nowadays.
I think that a wise person is someone who knows how to maintain a good relationship with other people.

DAVE 2017-10-09

Cyber University is the right place for me to study while working. I think getting old is not just watching people be untied but we need to do our best for the present. I think a wise person doesn't give up his relationship with other people easily.

161 yoo su JA ´äº¯: 2 2017-10-03 117 ´ä±Û

³ª´Â °áÈ¥Àü¿¡ Áý¿¡¼­ ¿µ¾î¸¦ °¡¸£ÃÆ´Ù. ´ëÇÐÀº ¸ø°¡°í °áÈ¥Çß°í º£À̺ñ½ÃÅÍ¿Í »êÈÄ°ü¸®»ç ÀÚ°ÝÁõÀ» ¶¤´Ù. ¿ä¸®»çÀÇ ±æÀ» °ÉÀ¸¸é¼­ ÀÌÀÏÀ» ÇÔ²²Çß´Ù. ¾Öµé °áÈ¥½ÃÅ°°í ´ëÇÐÀÌ °¡°í½Í¾î¼­ ¾Æµ¿¿µ¾îÇаú¿¡¡¦

³ª´Â °áÈ¥Àü¿¡ Áý¿¡¼­ ¿µ¾î¸¦ °¡¸£ÃÆ´Ù. ´ëÇÐÀº ¸ø°¡°í °áÈ¥Çß°í º£À̺ñ½ÃÅÍ¿Í »êÈÄ°ü¸®»ç ÀÚ°ÝÁõÀ» ¶¤´Ù. ¿ä¸®»çÀÇ ±æÀ» °ÉÀ¸¸é¼­ ÀÌÀÏÀ» ÇÔ²²Çß´Ù. ¾Öµé °áÈ¥½ÃÅ°°í ´ëÇÐÀÌ °¡°í½Í¾î¼­ ¾Æµ¿¿µ¾îÇаú¿¡ Áö¿øÇß´Ù.

Sandy 2017-10-03

I taught English at home before marriage. I couldn't go to college, but I got a babysitter's and a post-nurse's certificates. I was also a cook, so I did these together. I wanted to go to college after my children got married, so I applied to the Department of English for children.

Andrew 2017-10-03

I was a home-based English teacher before I got married. I couldn't go to college so I tried to get a post-nurse certificate and baby-sitting certificate. I also worked as a cook at that time. I want to study in college after my kids get married that's why I applied in the Department of Child English.

160 yoo su JA ´äº¯: 2 2017-10-01 134 ´ä±Û

³ª´Â ¿©°í¸¦ Á¹¾÷ÇÏ°í °¡Á¤ÀÌ ¾î·Á¿ö¼­ ´ëÇÐÀ» ÁøÇиøÇß´Ù. °áÈ¥ÇÏ°í ¿ä¸®»ç·Î ÀÏÇϸ鼭 ´ëÇÐÀ» °¡°í ½Í¾ú´Ù.

³ª´Â ¿©°í¸¦ Á¹¾÷ÇÏ°í °¡Á¤ÀÌ ¾î·Á¿ö¼­ ´ëÇÐÀ» ÁøÇиøÇß´Ù. °áÈ¥ÇÏ°í ¿ä¸®»ç·Î ÀÏÇϸ鼭 ´ëÇÐÀ» °¡°í ½Í¾ú´Ù.

Andrew 2017-10-02

I graduated from high school but unable to go to college because of financial problem. I want to get married, work as a cook and go to college someday.

Lee Da Eun 2017-10-02

I graduated from high school but I was unable to go to college because of my family's financial problem. I want to be married and work as a cook as well as go to college.

159 bonggo ´äº¯: 2 2017-08-16 188 ´ä±Û 2017-08-16 16:09:03

Ä£±¸¿Í ¿À·£¸¸¿¡ ¸¸³µÀ» ¶§ "¿ì¸® 1³â¸¸¿¡ ¸¸³µ¾î", "³Ê¸¦ ¸¶Áö¸·À¸·Î º»°Ô 2³âÀüÀÌ´Ù" "Á¤¸» ¿À·£¸¸ÀÌ´Ù" ÀÌÇ¥ÇöÀÌ ±Ã±ÝÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

Ä£±¸¿Í ¿À·£¸¸¿¡ ¸¸³µÀ» ¶§ "¿ì¸® 1³â¸¸¿¡ ¸¸³µ¾î", "³Ê¸¦ ¸¶Áö¸·À¸·Î º»°Ô 2³âÀüÀÌ´Ù" "Á¤¸» ¿À·£¸¸ÀÌ´Ù" ÀÌÇ¥ÇöÀÌ ±Ã±ÝÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

½´½´ 2017-08-16

We met in a year.
It's been two years since I last saw you.
It's been a long time.

KimMinJung 2017-08-17

We met in one year.
It's been 2 years since we last met each other.
It's been a long while !

158 Lee Joon Sang ´äº¯: 2 2017-08-10 144 ´ä±Û

"±×ÀÏ¿¡ °üÇؼ­´Â ³ªÁß¿¡ ¸»ÇÒ ±âȸ°¡ ÀÖÀ» °Í °°¾Æ¿ä"¸¦ ¾î¶»°Ô Ç¥ÇöÇϳª¿ä?

"±×ÀÏ¿¡ °üÇؼ­´Â ³ªÁß¿¡ ¸»ÇÒ ±âȸ°¡ ÀÖÀ» °Í °°¾Æ¿ä"¸¦ ¾î¶»°Ô Ç¥ÇöÇϳª¿ä?

Cindy 2017-08-10

I think I have a chance to talk about it later.

MJ 2017-08-10

There will be time for talking about it again.


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